Pure Revision check list

1. Check the spelling and punctuation .
2. Check for a topic sentance that pulls the reader in.
3. Check that the reader has split the writing into paragraphs.
4. The way the writer uses words.
5. Check if the writer uses diologue.
6. Not make all sentances the same length.
7. Check to see if there is iorny.
8. See if they have a good conclusion sentances.
9. Check that the sentances flow well.
10. Check for lots of adverbs.

I wrote a paragraph last week, we corrected it today.I noticed that i used the word “and” alot. I will fix it by replacing all the ands with commas. I also used contractions pretty freakwently. I will make those not contractions. I did good on the rest in peace words, i only had a few of thoughs. I didn’t have a conclusion. I will put a conclusion in it.